Thursday 15 August 2019

The great pacific garbage patch



The great pacific garbage patch






Is an island made of rubbish it is 3 times the size of France it is located in between Hawaii and America the gpgp was discovered it in 1997 by Charles Moore scientists think it has been around since the sixties it was made from rubbish getting into the ocean? Animals are getting sick and also die from it they also living in it the rubbish which is not good.


WALT: write newsletters i have put my information logical paragraphs. i have proofread my work for errors
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 August 2019 at 12:24

    Tino Pai te mahi Dean! Very good work! I like how you have told us what you were learning and talked about how you achieved it. Next time make sure you put a space inbetween your paragraphs like you did in your book.

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  2. Anonymous26 August 2019 at 12:37

    Hello Dean, it's Emma.
    This is very good writing.
    To be BTB next time you could add more punctuation.
    Bye

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  3. Anonymous18 October 2019 at 11:52

    hi Dean its keoni here interesting work.
    next time you should re read your work.
    why did you do this post about The great pacific garbage patch?

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